This semester of spring I have the opportunity of
write a journal. This internal journal has certain characteristics we need to
follow with the idea of improve our writing. The journal will include 40
entries, they were daily reflection or thoughts and 24 compasses that will make
us think about our emotional, spiritual, physical and mental status. I enjoy writing
this journal because we have some rules to keep:
1) Keep your hand moving
2) Don’t cross out
3) Don’t worry about spelling, punctuation and grammar
4) Lose control
5) Don’t think and don’t get logical
6) Go for the jugular
5) Don’t think and don’t get logical
6) Go for the jugular
These rules was designed to help us to develop a
better writing, because permit us to see our mistakes. In the begging follow
these rules was very hard for me. I try to keep moving my hand and don’t cross
the mistakes I commit, but in the beginning I do it automatically. Cross my
mistakes affects all the other rules, because don’t permit me lose control and
capture exactly my first thinking. In the other hand go to the jugular maybe
was the unique rule more easy to pursue. With the continue writing in my
journey I see that every time was more easy for me to keep my hand moving and
express more clearly my thoughts. With the passage of the time I was getting more
and more speed when I wrote; furthermore increase the amount of pages per time.
When I see all the entries I do, I feel so proud. I can say that the diary improve my writing and
really contribute to enhance my vocabulary.
In other hand this internal journal permit me express
a lot of things that I don’t tell to anybody. This journal opens a door to know
better myself. I think that keep these diary is an excellent tool, to first confront
with the language and second to reflect on our daily lives. The majority of my
entries talk about the university. For me the university is the center of my
life. I am very close to finish my bachelor’s degree, for this I am making the
best I can, because my next goal is go to the medicine school to continue my
graduate studies. For now I am worry to obtain the best grades I can. This semester
all my classes give the assignments for the same days and the exams coincided
the same week. I was with a lot of work and my internal journal is the only
witness of all the anxiety and stress I felt. This journal was my scape to ventilate
all my emotions. I think this diary is to continue every time not just for the
class.
In my personal opinion the internal and the external
journey permit me to clarify and lose all the fear I felt for the language. The
diary also let me have a better expression of my scripture and more control of
my time at the moment of writing. This internal journal is has been for me a
journey, a journey to now better the language and in other way now better myself.
Great job Ytzel! I too feel that by using the journal it has helped me in the end of my bachelor's degree! It has helped us discover and document our internal journey.
ReplyDeleteGreat reflection Ytzel. I agree with you that this activity helped me to clarify my ideas and lose my fear toward the English language. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou surely did an excellent job!. I am glad that this tool permitted you a way to express better your thoughts and feelings. I totally agree with you when you said that this internal journey has been a journey to better know the language and of course oneself.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you that the journal helps us to improve our writing process. I also think like you that follow the rules of the "First Thoughts" was very difficult, but we did it. You did a excellent reflection about your inner journey. Good job!
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